I try, & am a fan
of running stones
& wadis & the
washes driest,
& deep-end pools,
appareled poles
& year-long piers,
& clarity,
truly nearest
Poetry
I try, & am a fan
of running stones
& wadis & the
washes driest,
& deep-end pools,
appareled poles
& year-long piers,
& clarity,
truly nearest
I like it. I especially liked ‘running stones’ and ‘appareled poles’ as well as ‘year-long piers.’ I don’t know what they mean but I like the images and the sounds. Also, kudos for using ‘wadis’. It’s a great ‘f-‘n’ word and a great image to conjure up. KB
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1 word, sounds like: maybe trampoline
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