three ravens
in chorus all
the more at rest
a rooftop
question, ‘if
I had thesaurus,
would I know
another language,
furthermore
nonetheless as
all the more
we have not
said before,’
I nod as they;
I ask of them
what of that
where it goes
with rainbow
on darken’d sky,
‘is that shore’
This one of the best of yours I have read. It is fluid in its movement even in staccati, end the language is clean. Excellent poem. –KB
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Thank you, KB; your verse, today, also, was you from another point of view: as someone else involved with another not necessarily you.
I felt assaulted in it, not as reader, more as witness.
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