O well, was I
from as far
into the arms
of that, I’m
sure of that,
& naturally
determined
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Poetry
O well, was I
from as far
into the arms
of that, I’m
sure of that,
& naturally
determined
ayaladn 
Hey, it’s early in th morning here0-1:40 AM I’m looking at your poem and I just don’t get the allusions to anything you are asaying in it. What are you saying in it. I am all for bare bones language, and it’s true I have been off the scene for quite a few years, though not much seems to have changed. I’d like some insight into what you are hoping to communicate or acomplish with your use of laguage. To be obtuse is one thing but to be obtuse just for the sake of being obtuse is so old that it was old when I was coming up. I’m just trying to understand what it is you are doing. I mean Wallace Stevens and John Ashberry are a bit obtuse but there is artifice in their writing. KB
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the difference between pertinent and impertinent
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