4nnnns = 8ft
(must you run):
the image as
elusive as
(I suppose)
homage #1,
a patent
reflex of
(in action)
overrun;
O yes, ps
(as he was):
‘only there
were bells’
Poetry
4nnnns = 8ft
(must you run):
the image as
elusive as
(I suppose)
homage #1,
a patent
reflex of
(in action)
overrun;
O yes, ps
(as he was):
‘only there
were bells’
I love this free flowing style of verse, with all the body parts. Although your words also trigger my imagination in the ‘horror film’ direction : ) Love the imagery anyway.
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this is ‘collective commentary’…thank you, one to one
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