to El Greco
at the ivy wall,
who needs to know
why piccolos at
first adjust to
perfect pitch &
twist their necks
like seventh –
stretchers in the
bleachers — well,
it’s not cricket —
‘but what’s third base’
(she wants to know)
the rooftop shouts
at once, ‘foul ball’
& that’s a bat
ayaladn 
I’m with you on this one. I like it. It has a humor to it that somewhat accessible and it has a rythmn to it and a sense that in understandable. Oh and thanks for following my blog. Actually thanks for your comments and likes before following it.
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Oh I had some trouble(again, with WordPress) & had to delete & re-follow everyone from scratch; I won’t lose you, but I miss you
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I’m here, just been busy with major computer screw up and writing.
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I thought you were in France, or Quebec; I have merely editing erractica & wish you well
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