some or whole
think tanks
& sub-maroons
on the coast
of Seminole
or Baltia —
if a moon
wont dewy,
well, why’s
the sun go
odd & even
recluse, yes,
reflection of
vitelline —
a violin at
rest, so as
the magnet as
a tuning fork —
whalers, what
have we done (?)
ayaladn 
I like the rythm in this. It’s kind of sing songy. I work hard at try to assemble a meaning to some of your work, well I don’t always suceed. Perhaps? I’m not not meant to-sorry this so late I’ve been busy today. KB
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Thanks KB, is it OK if it only resembles meaning? Or do you shy from it? Sleep well.
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Actually it doesn’t need to mean anything for me, so long as it sounds good. Like Jabberwocky is one of my favorite poems. I write stuff all the time that doesn’t mean anything–it’s like flexing muscles. But I guess I’m hung up on meaning because I have to work so hard most times to get that across in the work. But that’s my style. I try, and when I say I like something I honestly like it.
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Yes, no good in flattery. But, if you’ve posted any flexibles, you have thought wrongly of them.
I could tell you what is known of this one, but, I’ll email you its concerted source instead. Till then.
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