Sue & Julian
planned a cabin,
a canoe to
paddle middlin’
the pristine
predevelopment
surround them,
would they
as retirees
choose seclusion
or drift ashore,
ax & adze
abandoned
to a reverie
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ayaladn 
I say go with the reverie!>KB
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Without a doubt, KB.
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without a & a — ie:Purpose — no amount of relaxation (ie: reverie) gonna cut it. (in military lisp, reverie =”awakening”) entertainers (women) always pay the price for those without their adz and ax. un-me stopped being masochistic a ways back.
“better to not make sense of it all and stay busy” ~paraphrased from Hitchhiker’s GTTG
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Aiding & Abetting? Armed & Angry? Not here…reveille?
Well, reverie is not the keyword, although this was a quiet site.
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“Predevelopment” is so perfectly placed in this piece hinting at a light note of cynicism concerning daydreams. Excellent job.
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Thank you, William…they took a photo, and went home.
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