An Old Man

half a day away

from a candle cupp’d hand held

that is btw’n as

as low’down pillows

lace curtains bill & wing too

window in clean air

now theirs is a wake

thousands on a blue foreshore

whither wade awhile

Published by ayaladn

annotating60 says:

April 10, 2013 at 1:09 pm

Very nice I think–very bluish in an ish-ish weigh.

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1. j4n says:
  
  April 10, 2013 at 1:19 pm
  
  What does ish-ish mean for you?
  
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