an affect as moss
some say as rust a crosscut
truss a cornerstone
downspout apparel
an oaken barrel bramble
tamp a corncob pipe
thistle this ol’ field
a wild rose the chaff trousseau
thatch roof distaff patch
an affect as moss
some say as rust a crosscut
truss a cornerstone
downspout apparel
an oaken barrel bramble
tamp a corncob pipe
thistle this ol’ field
a wild rose the chaff trousseau
thatch roof distaff patch
I like this one so much! Faerie elements and lovely title. Such skillful sound play: “moss/some say/rust/cross/truss”, “apparel/barrel, bramble/tamp” and “thistle/this ‘ol, distaff/chaff, thatch/patch” etc.
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some say wise old wives
never waste potato eyes
tasty wee french fries
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Alright, that’s weird…I just was writing about potato eyes on Facebook yesterday…so either you saw it or that is a first class synchronicity. I’d have responded in a more poetic vein but…potato eyes have seen too much.
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please don’t sync so loud
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subtlety surrendered to surprise. mine must have been green potatoes.
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it’s like staring down an earworm
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